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LEGION: RTS
Medieval Games: Empire Battle11/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “RTS”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Empire Battle”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
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Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 254 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 87 characters.
254 characters.
Enough substance
2,296 characters.
0 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
7 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshot is landscape.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshot is landscape.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
10 iPad screenshots.
4.08 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.76 average.
158 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
817 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 460 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 153 days ago.
102 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “fixed a bug causing gems to go missing for some people.”
1 language.
Localised listing
7 languages.
231 MB.
Reasonable download size
324 MB.