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Commure Ambient - ScribeMobile
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Formerly Athelas Scribe
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
11/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “ScribeMobile”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Formerly Athelas Scribe”
Has a subtitle
“Medical”
23/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
7/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 254 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 41 characters.
411 characters.
Enough substance
2,717 characters.
0 bullet lines, 1 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
11 bullet lines, 12 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
6 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
4.67 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
3.00 average.
42 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
10 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 2 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 11 days ago.
Generic notes: “- Bug fixes”
Release notes say something
240 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
147 MB.
Reasonable download size
75 MB.