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Marsaction 2: Space Homestead
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Explore & Conquer the Mars
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
11/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Space Homestead”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Explore & Conquer the Mars”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
26/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 223 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 199 characters.
2,172 characters.
Enough substance
285 characters.
0 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 1 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshot is landscape.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
7 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.60 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.61 average.
5,035 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
8,519 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 67 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 45 days ago.
Generic notes: “· Bugs fixed and other optimizations”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug fixes”
8 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
905 MB.
Reasonable download size
567 MB.