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HNAK Online Shopping in Saudi
AL MUSBAH GLOBAL TRADING LIMITED COMPANY
4/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Shopping”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
8/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 28 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 251 characters.
28 characters.
Enough substance
2,025 characters.
0 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
4.76 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
2.50 average.
318 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
16 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 3 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 15 days ago.
Generic notes: “تحسينات في الأداء”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “App performance improvements & minor bug fixes”
2 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
73 MB.
Reasonable download size
85 MB.