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Werewolf & Romance Fiction
10/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Completed Story”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Werewolf & Romance Fiction”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
26/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 43 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 25 characters.
1,440 characters.
Enough substance
1,208 characters.
9 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
14 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.77 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.85 average.
15,636 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
37,583 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 60 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 747 days ago.
132 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Reading experience improved. Fixed some bugs.”
1 language.
Localised listing
6 languages.
122 MB.
Reasonable download size
104 MB.