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FocusX for Twitter
Tweetx for Twitter18/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
18/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Improve the tweet experience”
Has a subtitle
“Find bookmarks,download videos”
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 150 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 17 characters.
1,706 characters.
Enough substance
2,853 characters.
15 bullet lines, 15 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
25 bullet lines, 17 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
7 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
9 iPad screenshots.
2.50 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.55 average.
8 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
40 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 313 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 579 days ago.
Generic notes: “fix following list issue”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “稳定性改进和错误修复”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
113 MB.
Reasonable download size
121 MB.