Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
ZomBees - Shooter
Combat Cruiser17/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
14/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Shooter”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Zombie Shooting - 2D Shooter”
Has a subtitle
“Assemble as you go”
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
18/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “shooter”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 57 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 66 characters.
1,498 characters.
Enough substance
409 characters.
4 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
3 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.90 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.57 average.
13,280 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
27,984 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 1 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 31 days ago.
Generic notes: “- New Levels - New Hero: Scorch - Optimized Experience - Minor Perform…”
Release notes say something
93 characters of release notes.
35 languages.
Localised listing
11 languages.
324 MB.
Reasonable download size
357 MB.