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Billiards Draw
Caromerong14/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
10/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Billiards Draw”
Has a subtitle
“App for Carom 3C billiard game”
14/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “billiards”, “draw”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 315 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 240 characters.
723 characters.
Enough substance
529 characters.
0 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
3 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
3 iPad screenshots.
No ratings yet.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
No ratings yet.
0 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
0 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 360 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 786 days ago.
Generic notes: “Minor fixes”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Improved physics engine. Fixed bugs in practice mode.”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
129 MB.
Reasonable download size
23 MB.