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Heave Tech: Fix Equipment
Rig Mechanic25/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
12/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Fix Equipment”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Productivity”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
12/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 216 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 36 characters.
1,372 characters.
Enough substance
857 characters.
0 bullet lines, 12 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.36 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
3.80 average.
14 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
20 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 53 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 11 days ago.
103 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Fixed bug in offer creation”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
99 MB.
Reasonable download size
122 MB.