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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Battlesmiths: Medieval Battle
Mobile Dungeon: RPG Crawler29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Medieval Battle”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “RPG Crawler”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Tactical RPG: Craft & Forge”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 347 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 34 characters.
2,453 characters.
Enough substance
2,303 characters.
6 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
3 bullet lines, 10 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshot is landscape.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
6 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
8 iPad screenshots.
4.63 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.81 average.
736 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
2,488 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 15 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 23 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fixes.”
Release notes say something
230 characters of release notes.
12 languages.
Localised listing
8 languages.
529 MB.
Reasonable download size
295 MB.