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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Gyraline
Shopmonkey for Techs 2.08/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
24/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Fast Wheel Alignment”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
20/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 39 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 319 characters.
1,016 characters.
Enough substance
2,920 characters.
6 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
6 bullet lines, 13 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
3 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
8 iPad screenshots.
3.79 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
3.39 average.
100 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
83 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 10 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 3 days ago.
349 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and performance improvements.”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
63 MB.
Reasonable download size
198 MB.