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JB Finance جيبي للتمويل
هكبه | Hakbah24/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
13/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Hakbah”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Finance”
Has a subtitle
“Finance”
7/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
7/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “finance”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 27 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 47 characters.
355 characters.
Enough substance
2,538 characters.
0 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.51 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.64 average.
469 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
2,109 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 34 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 40 days ago.
Generic notes: “Mobile app performance improvements and general fixes”
Release notes say something
283 characters of release notes.
2 languages.
Localised listing
2 languages.
113 MB.
Reasonable download size
74 MB.