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moneymoon | موني مون24/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
20/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “موني مون”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Finance”
Has a subtitle
“Instant Finance,Monthly Invest”
7/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “finance”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 27 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 36 characters.
355 characters.
Enough substance
246 characters.
0 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
4 bullet lines, 1 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
4.51 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.20 average.
469 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
261 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 34 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 4 days ago.
Generic notes: “Mobile app performance improvements and general fixes”
Release notes say something
209 characters of release notes.
2 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
113 MB.
Reasonable download size
77 MB.