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Sharbatly Club24/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
14/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Delivery within 1 hour”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
22/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 102 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 421 characters.
1,106 characters.
Enough substance
421 characters.
10 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
8 iPad screenshots.
4.09 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.58 average.
68 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
1,567 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 14 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 10 days ago.
Generic notes: “performance improvements”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “New Products & Collections”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
81 MB.
Reasonable download size
139 MB.