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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
MacDermott Method
The Legacy Of Beauty17/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
20/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Happy Teens, Happy Families”
Has a subtitle
“Legacy Of Beauty”
27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
16/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “legacy”, “beauty”.
First paragraph is 204 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 168 characters.
937 characters.
Enough substance
297 characters.
3 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
4 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
3 iPad screenshots.
5.00 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
5.00 average.
3 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
1 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 218 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 207 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bugfixes”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bugfixes”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
89 MB.
Reasonable download size
90 MB.