Two listings. One rope.
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28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
24/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Idle RPG”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Idle Dungeons”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
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Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 53 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 213 characters.
2,077 characters.
Enough substance
883 characters.
20 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
7 bullet lines, 2 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
7 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
4.79 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.85 average.
812 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
7,846 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 568 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 51 days ago.
Generic notes: “- Minor error fixes - Localization improvements”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Server optimization.”
8 languages.
Localised listing
5 languages.
370 MB.
Reasonable download size
3281 MB.