Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Monét - Startup Plan Builder
Masterplan: Launch a BusinessMonét - Startup Plan Builder
Business Toolkit & Simulator
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Startup Plan Builder”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Launch a Business”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Business Toolkit & Simulator”
Has a subtitle
“Make your first $10k/mo”
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
23/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 40 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 54 characters.
3,190 characters.
Enough substance
834 characters.
26 bullet lines, 13 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
4 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
10 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
3 iPad screenshots.
4.50 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.81 average.
16 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
187 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 562 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 367 days ago.
454 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Expanded set of features to help you build your business!”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
20 MB.
Reasonable download size
148 MB.