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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Sky Defense: War Duty
Sniper Agent: Offline ShooterSky Defense: War Duty
Epic aircraft attacking game
21/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “War Duty”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Offline Shooter”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Epic aircraft attacking game”
Has a subtitle
“FPS offline shooter sniper gun”
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “offline”, “shooter”, “sniper”.
First paragraph is 56 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 385 characters.
1,098 characters.
Enough substance
3,044 characters.
5 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
1 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
8 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
9 iPad screenshots.
4.57 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.60 average.
11,194 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
33,816 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 81 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 10 days ago.
Generic notes: “Fix Bugs”
Release notes say something
281 characters of release notes.
19 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
313 MB.
Reasonable download size
326 MB.