Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Nayifat App
Jameel Business11/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
15/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
Contains filler: “app”.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Finance”
Has a subtitle
“Abdul Latif Jameel Finance”
7/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
26/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “jameel”.
First paragraph is 239 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 595 characters.
239 characters.
Enough substance
697 characters.
0 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 2 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.75 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
5.00 average.
4 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
5 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 8 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 150 days ago.
120 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “System Enhancement”
1 language.
Localised listing
2 languages.
58 MB.
Reasonable download size
32 MB.