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BusyBee: Work Order System
Maintainly26/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
10/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Work Order System”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Asset & work order management”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 182 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 105 characters.
182 characters.
Enough substance
1,223 characters.
0 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
10 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
3 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
9 iPad screenshots.
5.00 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
3.67 average.
1 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
3 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 451 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 4 days ago.
Generic notes: “1. Fixed Google Sign-In issue for smoother login experience. 2. Resolv…”
Release notes say something
652 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
53 MB.
Reasonable download size
79 MB.