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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
BusyBee: Work Order System
MaintainNow CMMS Work OrdersMaintainNow CMMS Work Orders
Work Orders, Maintenance, CMMS
26/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Work Order System”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Work Orders, Maintenance, CMMS”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “work”, “orders”, “cmms”.
First paragraph is 182 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 73 characters.
182 characters.
Enough substance
1,420 characters.
0 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
18 bullet lines, 11 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
3 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
5.00 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
5.00 average.
1 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
1 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 451 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 7 days ago.
Generic notes: “1. Fixed Google Sign-In issue for smoother login experience. 2. Resolv…”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug Fixes and Improvements”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
53 MB.
Reasonable download size
65 MB.