Two listings. One rope.
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29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Idle defense RPG”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Mobile RPG”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Archer's Idle Adventure”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
23/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
Repeats title words: “idle”.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 160 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 186 characters.
1,355 characters.
Enough substance
1,565 characters.
4 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
6 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
8 iPad screenshots.
4.72 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.35 average.
454 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
122 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 81 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 858 days ago.
Generic notes: “Brand new environments Tower skins are here Minor bug fixes and improv…”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “New content added”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
226 MB.
Reasonable download size
156 MB.