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Territory Helper
MyTime – Jehovah's Witnesses16/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Jehovah's Witnesses”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Territory Helper Companion App”
Has a subtitle
“Productivity”
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
12/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “territory”, “helper”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 168 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 294 characters.
1,847 characters.
Enough substance
1,618 characters.
27 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
11 bullet lines, 2 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
8 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
4 iPad screenshots.
4.81 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.43 average.
1,414 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
620 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 3 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 8 days ago.
65 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
178 characters of release notes.
0 languages.
Localised listing
24 languages.
102 MB.
Reasonable download size
11 MB.