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gun.deals6/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
9/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Best deals on guns and ammo”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “deals”, “guns”.
First paragraph is 476 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 244 characters.
1,823 characters.
Enough substance
2,426 characters.
2 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
9 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.21 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.84 average.
68 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
23,913 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 13 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 364 days ago.
84 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “- Fixed a crash when swiping through images in the gallery - Improved …”
68 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
379 MB.
Reasonable download size
14 MB.