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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Power Zone: PvP Online Shooter
Dilly for Fortnite30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
18/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “PvP Online Shooter”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Quick Matchmaking & 1v1 Duels”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 336 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 34 characters.
2,786 characters.
Enough substance
2,206 characters.
10 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
2 bullet lines, 14 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
7 iPad screenshots.
4.68 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.72 average.
19,800 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
156,554 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 160 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 9 days ago.
99 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “New Sprites Added!”
5 languages.
Localised listing
11 languages.
815 MB.
Reasonable download size
113 MB.