Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
noplace: make new friends
Hoop - make new friendsHoop - make new friends
Meet real people & social chat
25/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
23/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “make new friends”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “make new friends”.
Contains filler: “new”.
No wasted words
Contains filler: “new”.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Meet real people & social chat”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 68 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 7 characters.
1,149 characters.
Enough substance
1,163 characters.
0 bullet lines, 12 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
5 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
3.90 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.49 average.
3,903 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
684,083 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 22 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 108 days ago.
Generic notes: “Stability fixes. Less crashing, more yapping.”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Hey! :) We have improved the overall performance and did some bug fix…”
1 language.
Localised listing
12 languages.
83 MB.
Reasonable download size
200 MB.