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Sauna Journal
The Outsiders Fitness TrackerThe Outsiders Fitness Tracker
Training Readiness & Recovery
13/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Track your sauna sessions.”
Has a subtitle
“Training Readiness & Recovery”
26/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “sauna”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 559 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 73 characters.
559 characters.
Enough substance
3,546 characters.
0 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
25 bullet lines, 22 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
5.00 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.63 average.
2 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
129 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 929 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 10 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fixes.”
Release notes say something
1586 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
10 languages.
2 MB.
Reasonable download size
160 MB.