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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Color By Number”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Color By Number”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Relaxing Paint By Number Games”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
Repeats title words: “number”.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 41 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 314 characters.
1,729 characters.
Enough substance
3,230 characters.
15 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
13 bullet lines, 12 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
4 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
4.83 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.81 average.
809 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
398,145 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 95 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 15 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and performance improvements”
Release notes say something
141 characters of release notes.
8 languages.
Localised listing
25 languages.
110 MB.
Reasonable download size
244 MB.