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Magic Sort!
Water Jam: 3D Color Sort Game11/30 characters. A brand this well known can afford a short title.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone, which is fine at this brand size.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “3D Color Sort Game”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Water Sorting Puzzle”
Has a subtitle
“Relaxing 3D Color Sort Puzzles”
20/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “color”, “sort”.
First paragraph is 232 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 280 characters.
1,995 characters.
Enough substance
2,605 characters.
13 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
7 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
5 iPad screenshots.
4.72 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.87 average.
664,169 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
7,816 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 4 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 13 days ago.
Generic notes: “Are you ready for a magical new update? -New 100 levels! -Bug Fixes &…”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “- Fixed known issues and bugs.”
11 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
603 MB.
Reasonable download size
191 MB.