Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Don’t Touch My Phone: Alarm
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Anti-Theft Protection & Alert
27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
24/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Alarm”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Alarm”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Anti-Theft Protection & Alert”
Has a subtitle
“Anti-theft alarm for phone”
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
26/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “alarm”, “phone”.
First paragraph is 147 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 346 characters.
892 characters.
Enough substance
1,762 characters.
0 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
4 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
4 iPad screenshots.
4.62 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
2.41 average.
2,159 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
133 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 29 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 27 days ago.
Generic notes: “We've fixed some bugs to improve the app's stability and performance. …”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “-fix bug”
10 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
100 MB.
Reasonable download size
48 MB.