Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
OnTheJob App
Springshot!Both fight for
No overlap. These two are not chasing the same searches.
Only Springshot!
12/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
11/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
Contains filler: “app”.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Business”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
8/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 98 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 148 characters.
1,388 characters.
Enough substance
148 characters.
0 bullet lines, 13 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
4 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
4 iPad screenshots.
3.28 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
2.91 average.
153 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
32 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 38 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 35 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and security improvements”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “UAT improvements Bug fixes”
1 language.
Localised listing
4 languages.
46 MB.
Reasonable download size
134 MB.