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Armor Attack: Mech & Tank PvP
Starborne Frontiers29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
19/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Mech & Tank PvP”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Online Mech War · 5v5 PvP TPS”
Has a subtitle
“Command Your Space Fleet!”
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
25/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “mech”, “pvp”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 857 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 86 characters.
857 characters.
Enough substance
3,519 characters.
0 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
11 bullet lines, 33 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshot is landscape.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshot is landscape.
9 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
8 iPad screenshots.
4.43 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.67 average.
1,022 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
1,278 ratings.
Last 40 written reviews average 3.3★.
Recent reviews are positive
Last 40 written reviews average 3.3★.
Last update 108 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 12 days ago.
Generic notes: “BUG FIXES & STABILITY IMPROVEMENTS Resolved several crash scenarios, r…”
Release notes say something
133 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
1178 MB.
Reasonable download size
914 MB.