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Haven - Bible Chat
#Bible - Verse of the Day18/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
25/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Bible Chat”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Verse of the Day”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Daily Guidance, Study & Prayer”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 27 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 536 characters.
1,042 characters.
Enough substance
1,336 characters.
1 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 4 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
4.88 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.88 average.
149,244 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
390,211 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 2 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 20 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and improvements.”
Release notes say something
1407 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
220 MB.
Reasonable download size
61 MB.