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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Haven - Bible Chat
Bible Study - Manna18/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
19/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Bible Chat”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Manna”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
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Uses the 30 characters
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Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 27 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 138 characters.
1,042 characters.
Enough substance
3,786 characters.
1 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
11 bullet lines, 16 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.88 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.91 average.
149,244 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
31,072 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 2 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 67 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and improvements.”
Release notes say something
435 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
7 languages.
220 MB.
Reasonable download size
375 MB.