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PunchList-Construction Manager
Winmail.dat Opener: Pro Reader30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Construction Manager”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Pro Reader”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Site Issues & Project Reports”
Has a subtitle
“Dat, TNEF, MSG & XPS”
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
20/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “dat”.
First paragraph is 58 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 112 characters.
1,645 characters.
Enough substance
1,177 characters.
19 bullet lines, 17 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
14 bullet lines, 5 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
3 iPad screenshots.
1.00 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
No ratings yet.
1 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
0 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 419 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 105 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fixes”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Optimized algorithms and improved feature stability.”
1 language.
Localised listing
46 languages.
4 MB.
Reasonable download size
7 MB.