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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Deer Hunt Animal Shooting Game
Duck Hunting 3D - FPS ShootingDuck Hunting 3D - FPS Shooting
Deer Hunting Games - Simulator
30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “FPS Shooting”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Deer Hunting Games - Simulator”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “hunting”.
First paragraph is 57 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 281 characters.
1,935 characters.
Enough substance
2,318 characters.
0 bullet lines, 13 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
9 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
10 iPad screenshots.
3.73 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.47 average.
75 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
5,143 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 16 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 88 days ago.
Generic notes: “This update includes: Minor fixes Game Optimisation”
Release notes say something
169 characters of release notes.
8 languages.
Localised listing
14 languages.
378 MB.
Reasonable download size
780 MB.