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Shadow Work App: Daily Journal
Bullet Journal for Mind & Body
26/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Shadow Work”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Daily Journal”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
Contains filler: “app”.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Bullet Journal for Mind & Body”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “journal”.
First paragraph is 369 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 82 characters.
569 characters.
Enough substance
1,352 characters.
0 bullet lines, 2 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
13 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
3 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
3 iPad screenshots.
5.00 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
5.00 average.
4 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
10 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 612 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 451 days ago.
Generic notes: “- Minor bug fix Happy Journaling!”
Release notes say something
No release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
54 MB.
Reasonable download size
44 MB.