Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
tmdroid: Tumblr Dashboard App
One-Handed Tumblr Client
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
9/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Tumblr Dashboard App”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
Contains filler: “app”.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“One-Handed Tumblr Client”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
24/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
Repeats title words: “tumblr”.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 40 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 56 characters.
1,219 characters.
Enough substance
202 characters.
13 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 2 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
3/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
3 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
4 iPad screenshots.
3.00 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.25 average.
3 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
4 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 31 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 68 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bulk actions are now available on user pages, search results, and Like…”
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and improvements”
2 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
113 MB.
Reasonable download size
12 MB.