Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
15/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Live Your Story”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“AI Stories & RPG”
Has a subtitle
“Feel chosen”
16/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
11/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “stories”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 82 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 33 characters.
1,972 characters.
Enough substance
1,093 characters.
4 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
5/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
5 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.58 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.32 average.
11,124 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
24,634 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 1 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 8 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and improvements”
Release notes say something
167 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
5 languages.
232 MB.
Reasonable download size
235 MB.