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Charlotte Simmons
Breathe Right: Nasal Breathing17/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Nasal Breathing”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Breathwork”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
10/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 248 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 54 characters.
1,818 characters.
Enough substance
2,164 characters.
0 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 19 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
No ratings yet.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
5.00 average.
0 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
1 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 707 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 1 days ago.
Generic notes: “- Nee Breathes. - New latest videos. - Calendar updates. - Bug fixes …”
Release notes say something
120 characters of release notes.
10 languages.
Localised listing
10 languages.
296 MB.
Reasonable download size
205 MB.