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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Minesweeper – Logic Puzzle
Onyx: Modern Minesweeper26/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
24/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Logic Puzzle”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Modern Minesweeper”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
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Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 31 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 127 characters.
3,313 characters.
Enough substance
2,041 characters.
19 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
11 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
6 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
7 iPad screenshots.
4.15 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.71 average.
13 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
7 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 0 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 7 days ago.
Generic notes: “- Performance and stability improvements - Bug fixes”
Release notes say something
144 characters of release notes.
20 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
94 MB.
Reasonable download size
6 MB.