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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Mashreq Pakistan
Pesa (Formerly Pesapeer)16/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
24/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Secure digital banking”
Has a subtitle
“Send & Receive Money Abroad”
22/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
27/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 220 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 62 characters.
2,811 characters.
Enough substance
3,601 characters.
2 bullet lines, 16 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
7 bullet lines, 6 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
4 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
4.63 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.42 average.
91 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
1,335 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 2 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 0 days ago.
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and minor enhancements.”
Release notes say something
134 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
230 MB.
Reasonable download size
246 MB.