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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Breathe Right: Nasal Breathing
BreathState30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
11/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Nasal Breathing”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Three minutes. Real reset.”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
26/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 54 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 84 characters.
2,164 characters.
Enough substance
2,119 characters.
0 bullet lines, 19 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
11 bullet lines, 15 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
8/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
5.00 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
No ratings yet.
1 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
0 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 1 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 109 days ago.
120 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Ui improvment bug fixes”
10 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
205 MB.
Reasonable download size
241 MB.