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Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Oharion
Grind Hero: MMORPG7/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
18/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “MMORPG”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Roleplaying”
Has a subtitle
“No boring quests, pure MMORPG”
11/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “mmorpg”.
First paragraph is 570 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 75 characters.
570 characters.
Enough substance
2,090 characters.
0 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
9 bullet lines, 11 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
3 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
4 iPad screenshots.
3.00 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.43 average.
2 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
56 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 3 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 0 days ago.
Generic notes: “melhorias na qualidade de vida”
Release notes say something
159 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
1113 MB.
Reasonable download size
1140 MB.