Two listings. One rope.
Pick your app and a competitor to see who wins each check, and which keywords only one of you holds.
Oharion
SUN: Origin7/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
11/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Origin”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Roleplaying”
Has a subtitle
“WEBZEN Licensed, Classic MMO”
11/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
28/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 570 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 219 characters.
570 characters.
Enough substance
1,958 characters.
0 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
3 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
3.00 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.93 average.
2 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
14 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 3 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 16 days ago.
Generic notes: “melhorias na qualidade de vida”
Release notes say something
160 characters of release notes.
1 language.
Localised listing
15 languages.
1113 MB.
Reasonable download size
1013 MB.