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Secret Place Devotional
MFM Dallas Texas23/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
16/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Secret Place”
Has a subtitle
“Lifestyle”
12/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
9/30 characters used.
Repeats title words: “secret”, “place”.
Adds new keywords
No words repeated from the title.
First paragraph is 970 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 20 characters.
970 characters.
Enough substance
1,215 characters.
0 bullet lines, 0 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
6 bullet lines, 7 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
10/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
10 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
No ratings yet.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
5.00 average.
0 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
3 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 400 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 140 days ago.
No release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “fixes image being shown on the home page”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
119 MB.
Reasonable download size
38 MB.