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Spark - Social In Your Hands
Grain Social28/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
12/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Social In Your Hands”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Title is the name alone.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Take back your Timeline”
Has a subtitle
“A photo-first social app”
23/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
24/30 characters used.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “social”.
First paragraph is 45 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 34 characters.
593 characters.
Enough substance
880 characters.
0 bullet lines, 3 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 12 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
5.00 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
5.00 average.
3 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
2 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 2 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 17 days ago.
931 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Bug fixes and performance improvements.”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
62 MB.
Reasonable download size
18 MB.