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30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
29/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Cartoon Photo Editor”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Toonio”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
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Uses the 30 characters
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Adds new keywords
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First paragraph is 89 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 65 characters.
3,031 characters.
Enough substance
2,617 characters.
15 bullet lines, 11 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
1 bullet lines, 22 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
9/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
0 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
0 iPad screenshots.
4.75 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.66 average.
198 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
47 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 154 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 336 days ago.
Generic notes: “This version of Cartoony: Cartoon Photo Editor includes bug fixes and …”
Release notes say something
146 characters of release notes.
12 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
67 MB.
Reasonable download size
63 MB.