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GreenPal, Lawn & Yard Care App
Shovler: Snow Removal OnDemand30/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Title is the name alone.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “Snow Removal OnDemand”.
Contains filler: “app”.
No wasted words
No filler words.
Could not read the store page.
Has a subtitle
“Hire snow shovelers on-demand!”
Could not read the store page.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Could not read the store page.
Adds new keywords
Repeats title words: “snow”.
First paragraph is 64 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 397 characters.
1,984 characters.
Enough substance
2,170 characters.
0 bullet lines, 9 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 10 paragraph breaks.
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
Shows social proof
Mentions users, ratings, press or awards.
4/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
4 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
4 iPad screenshots.
4.60 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.36 average.
3,369 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
1,695 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 4 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 246 days ago.
401 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
Generic notes: “Fix bugs and improve user experience”
1 language.
Localised listing
1 language.
96 MB.
Reasonable download size
131 MB.