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HeartIQ: Heart Rate Monitor
Lumi Skin:The Skincare Scanner27/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
30/30 characters used.
Keyword part: “Heart Rate Monitor”.
Carries a keyword, not only a brand
Keyword part: “The Skincare Scanner”.
No filler words.
No wasted words
No filler words.
“Pulse Tracker, Heartbeat, ECG”
Has a subtitle
Could not read the store page.
29/30 characters used.
Uses the 30 characters
Could not read the store page.
No words repeated from the title.
Adds new keywords
Could not read the store page.
First paragraph is 55 characters.
Opens with a tight hook
First paragraph is 45 characters.
3,721 characters.
Enough substance
1,597 characters.
0 bullet lines, 18 paragraph breaks.
Easy to scan
0 bullet lines, 8 paragraph breaks.
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
Shows social proof
No user counts, press or awards mentioned.
7/10 iPhone screenshots.
Fills the 10 screenshot slots
6/10 iPhone screenshots.
First screenshots are portrait.
Portrait panels up front
First screenshots are portrait.
7 iPad screenshots.
iPad screenshots
6 iPad screenshots.
4.62 average.
Rating of 4.5 or higher
4.73 average.
13 ratings.
Enough ratings to be trusted
712 ratings.
No recent written reviews available.
Recent reviews are positive
No recent written reviews available.
Last update 38 days ago.
Updated recently
Last update 34 days ago.
116 characters of release notes.
Release notes say something
151 characters of release notes.
2 languages.
Localised listing
1 language.
150 MB.
Reasonable download size
93 MB.